Chrysalis Corporation
Erstellt: 29.11.2009
Letzte Änderung: 30.11.2009
Letzte Änderung: 30.11.2009
nicht abgeschlossen (32%)
Englisch
6613 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
6613 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
Thema: Eigene Serie
An original fiction that my writing partner Aikyo and I have been writing recently, taking a break from our normal story. This is still in progress, it is an RP. It's many years in the future and the main source of military and political maneuverings is run by the Chrysalis Corporation. The our two main factions - the Fighters and the Cores. The Fighters are what they sound like, the pilot the ships and fighter against the pirates/rebels. The Cores are mechanical and technologically advanced humans taken at birth from pleasure colonies strictly for the purpose of working for the Corps. They have no emotions and are supposed to follow their chosen Fighter's every order. Supposed to. This is about Damion, a Fighter, and 47 aka Requiem, a Core.
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 29.11.2009 U: 30.11.2009 |
Kommentare (1 ) 6613 Wörter |
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Kapitel 1 Part 1 | E: 29.11.2009 U: 29.11.2009 |
Kommentare (0) 2853 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 2 Part 2 | E: 30.11.2009 U: 30.11.2009 |
Kommentare (1) 3750 Wörter nicht abgeschlossen (35%) |
Hi, I just kind of stumbled over your story and I like it, a lot.
Normally I would not ad a comment.
Most of the time I fell like: Yeah! I don´t have something to say, except, "good work".
But Now I do! I would love you to go on with this story. To be honest I beg you to!
Pleas, I would love to watch the tow of them get to know each other better. And whatever you were planning to let them go through.
So I hope my english is not that far of, I am not a native after all.
With regards
Arislan
Normally I would not ad a comment.
Most of the time I fell like: Yeah! I don´t have something to say, except, "good work".
But Now I do! I would love you to go on with this story. To be honest I beg you to!
Pleas, I would love to watch the tow of them get to know each other better. And whatever you were planning to let them go through.
So I hope my english is not that far of, I am not a native after all.
With regards
Arislan
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 2: Part 2