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Fight in Kokuritsu

It was one of these days that Matsumoto Jun hated like no other. On that

kind of a day nothing could raise his tension. Not even Nino getting

pwned by Aiba in Super Mario...

Arashi was staying in their dressing room, waiting for the technicians

to repair the broken audio system and continue with their concert

rehearsals. Today would be the first day of their Kokuritsu Anniversary

Tour. Aiba was talking cheerfully to Sho, who was reading a newspaper.

Riida sat on the couch with his sketch book, a wincing Nino next to him.

He had been down since Aiba had beaten him on Super Mario Cart not even

a half hour ago. "Serves him right", thought Jun grumbling. Yes, he was

in bad mood.

His gazed shifted to Sho and his eye caught an article on the backside

of the newspaper with an awfully fimilar handsome face looking back at

him. "Satomi Ishihara joins cast of Ningen Shikkaku as Ikuta's wife", it

said. If even possible Jun's mood dropped a few points more.

He flipped his phone open and stared at the screen. No messages, no

missed calls, nothing. Not even an entry of the jweb. It was sad enough

that he had to subscribe for Tomagoto instead of getting news from this

certain someone, who was currently being busy in Kyoto, himself. He

hadn't seen him much since this year began. Arashi has had a bunch of

work recently, sometimes Jun, Arashi's perfectionist, wondered how the

hell they managed all this...

Jun didn't know how long he sat there, staring into thin air and

thinking, but sometime later he got a  slap on his head from Aiba. "Oi

we can continue!" His band mates stared at him disbelieving. Aiba shoved

him out of his chair and out of the dressing room, he didn't even hear

how Nino talked in his phone with a mishievous grin.

Hours later they were discussing the last things for tonights show.

Jun's mood was still down, but also he was scared. He hoped that nothing

went wrong tonight. He was so absored in the thoughts of tonights

show,that he didn't hear the door open and he didn't see someone

entering. Just a small slap on his had brought him back to reality. "Are

you sleeping with open eyes or what?", he heard someone say. He turned

around unbelivelingly, thinking that he might have imagined the voice.

But then he saw it, the brightest and most wonderful smile he knew.

"Yo!", Toma said still smiling. "I'm done with shooting" Jun thought

there was nothing that could make him feel better today, now he knew he

was wrong.



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Von: abgemeldet
2009-10-14T15:19:54+00:00 14.10.2009 17:19
Thanks so much :D I'm so happy to get comments <3
Von: abgemeldet
2009-10-14T12:50:42+00:00 14.10.2009 14:50
You've got a simple style of telling and I like that very much. ^^ The chapter also could have been longer, the curiousity just had been waken up.

I think your english is great - I had no problems with the vocabulary as a text of a native speaker would provide. ^^
I was also thinking about wrting a ff in english, but I'm afraid my english knowlegde is too bad for that. ^^

I'm not so into Arashi, unfortunately, I don't know which member is meant, when his name is mentioned. But in this story it doesn't matter at all, 'cause you can make the storyline very understandable even for outsiders. ^^

At least I do know Toma and Jun, and I like them very much, too. ^^

The breaks between the text is very good here, makes it easy to follow the text. ^^

Greetings!


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